Our assignment was to create stories with three to four sentences.
First I took a picture to show the setting of the story, then I took one to
show the action that was going on in the story. After that I took a picture showing the
Ending. I also tried to make the stories easier to understand by organizing them into a collage.
I like your last photo set. I think it was interesting how you didn't just use the normal three panel shot, instead used different shapes to emphasize different photos.
ReplyDeleteI think its cool how you used different sizes and a different layout of panels but for the first story I can't tell which photo comes first. I like your third story.
ReplyDeleteNice job Long Long. I really love the third series. The perspective on the the last shot of the series is great. The first series is a bit unclear.
ReplyDeleteIm a little confused by the first one but I really like the last one. Good use of birds eye view.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very strong start to narrative photography. I really like how you focused on motion, perspective, and facial expression which helps convey different moods. I also find the transitions in the second series to be interesting as it conveys a clear story.
ReplyDeletei like your third one because theres actually some drama in it but in your first one it seems like nothing happens but you in a mask turning around. the second one is pretty clever but most people dont read anything up to down, so the format might be confusing for some at first. good job
ReplyDeleteGreat series. i think that you did a great job interpreting the assignment. I really liked your first story i think it is very well planed out.
ReplyDeleteNice photos. I especially like your last narrative. Your story creates a very realistic a dramatic scene and the way you captured it in the three steps is very accurate.
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