In this series I took pictures of building and I also tried to use
different angles and lines of symmetry in the photos like Lewis Baltz.
I also used a lot of black and white pictures in his series.
I kept some pictures with color because it helped to show the glass in the pictures.
I think you did a really good job of incorporating lines of symmetry in all of these photos. I really like your second photo and how you chose to keep it in color.
ReplyDeleteAwesome lines of symmetry. I think this is a major improvement from the first draft. The color definitely helped with the glass, and I think the black and white pictures were great as well, by adding a sort of deeper and serious tone.
ReplyDeleteGreat series Long long. i think your photos improved from your last series. however i found that you used a lot of the same angles and building i think that for your final series it would be better if you used her style on different buildings and from different angles.
ReplyDeletei think you did a really good job with following a certain type of style. I especially like the picture of the windows going up, it almost feels like I am walking in a hallway or something. good job longlong!
ReplyDeletemost of these are the same as before. a few new ones which look like an improvement on the last draft but most of them seem to be really plain. some good diminishing lines and geometry but these look like stock photos taken by a student
ReplyDeleteI like how you incorporated geometric shapes into your photos. Your photos are a little bit repetitive though so I think it would be good to expand off into other subjects or ideas. My particular favorite is your sixths photo because I really like the angle that you shot at, it gives a different perspective of the shapes and detail of the building.
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